some feedback on my makina pls :3

yoo i just started a makina remix of this one guilty crown ost, wat do u think so far? https://soundcloud.com/hentai-4/hentaicore-work-in-progress
recreating the melody and especially making a bassline was pretty hard but i think ill change something about these though~

diggin' the arrangement and idea as is. feel it'd mostly benefit from expanding it to be a bit longer